can you make me feel special?
Posted: March 18, 2012 Filed under: Poetry | Tags: heartbreak, Love, Personal, Poems, poet, Random, Random Thoughts, Relationships, Thoughts, Writing 26 Comments »
Love Love Love (Photo credit: Gregory Jordan)
Can you hold my hand one more time….
Can you make me feel as if you are mine?
Can you sit with me under the moonlight….
Can you let me see your face holding your hand for the whole night?
Love ? I love love love you. (Photo credit: @Doug88888)
Can you believe me if I will say “I am only yours”….
Can you give me a chance to wipe away all your tears?
Can you walk with me under the rain….
I believe it will wash away all your pain.
Love is real (Photo credit: Khánh Hmoong)
Can you say something to make me smile….
And let me forget my sadness for a while.
Can you do something to make me feel special….
Can you show me little unreal affection, as if it’s real?
Can you bring my belief in love once again….
Can you turn this world for me from hell to heaven?
Can you help my dreams to come true….
As I feel they have no values without you .
lovely Arindam! its the first poetry I’ve seen from you.. very simply worded and nice..
Thanks a lot. But I am not quite a poet. I just wrote something that was in my thought.
Who decides what we are and are not! from what I read you are a poet too.. in case u wish to be! (that is!):)
Thanks for the vote of confidence. But still I am not quite a poet, at least I do not think I am good enough to write a poem in English.
I don’t believe that..don’t make assumptions and let the ideas flow.. lets see what happens.. you’re still very young
Ok I will…
Thanks for being kind to me. 
Hi Arindam,
Really beautiful words that you have written, and nice photos to go with them as well.
Thanks a lot Mags.
such a passionate post filled with longing. i hope you find the one who can
Thanks a lot. Even I hope the same.
You are truly a romantic, Arindam. Lovely.
Ha!
Thanks a lot Renee. 
Lovely poetry, Arindam. Now you have two things to believe in for yourself — that you are a writer, and that you are a poet.
Thanks a lot Melissa.
I hope, I have to believe these things now. I hope you were not kidding Melissa. 
I’m not a poet at all, so I admire your efforts, but don’t feel I have any expertise to comment, besides telling you I thought it was lovely, and made me feel your emotions.
Thanks a lot Barb. You felt the emotion, it means I achieved what I wanted while writing this one. It was more of a thought than a poem. I am glad you liked it.
Touching words … very nice.
Thanks a lot Isadora.
You have written a poem so you’re a poet! and its very good too
Thanks for these kind words Gilly. I hope, I am a poet.
This is beautiful, Arindam.
Thanks a lot Patti.
This is beautiful and very romantic…
Thank you.
Beautiful poem!!
Thank you.
